After some suggestions I got from people I decided to change the title from "A Monster Tale" to "A Monster's Tale" so that it could be ambiguous between tale and tail. I decided to make this more visually obvious by giving the effect of someone crossing out the original and "correcting" it. I'm not sure which I prefer. But I think that I will probably go with the first one as it looks more like a mistake on the part of the "author" that has been corrected as oppose to the bottom one which looks more like the monster "corrected" it.
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